Thursday, April 08, 2010

Spooning

Silver spoon
feed me
sweet
nadas


Silver moon
spoon me
sweet
somethings


Peace, Linda
Posted by Linda at Thursday, April 08, 2010
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4 comments:

  1. Michael SolenderApril 8, 2010 at 7:51 PM

    nadas -love it

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  2. LauritaApril 9, 2010 at 7:04 AM

    Simple, sweet and satisfying. The rhythm of this made me smile.

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  3. MelissaApril 9, 2010 at 11:35 AM

    The rhythm and two stanzas work the parallel/contrast well. Simple and deep. And very satisfying.

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  4. J.C. TowlerApril 9, 2010 at 12:54 PM

    And silverware? Alas alack for the lost stanza. :-)

    --John

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