Thursday, April 08, 2010

Spooning

Silver spoon
feed me
sweet
nadas


Silver moon
spoon me
sweet
somethings


Peace, Linda

4 comments:

  1. Simple, sweet and satisfying. The rhythm of this made me smile.

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  2. The rhythm and two stanzas work the parallel/contrast well. Simple and deep. And very satisfying.

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  3. And silverware? Alas alack for the lost stanza. :-)

    --John

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