The morning Merilee disappeared, my lover died in a fire that started and ended in her queen-sized bed. The fire department declared arson, perhaps self-immolation, although they never found traces of accelerant. But I’d discovered Twenty-One Love Poems spread open on the rug, and remembered the heat from her hands stilled inches above my mons.
Inspired by the 52-250 Flash a Year theme -- spontaneous combustion -- and the urge to write a 55-word story. Heck, why not? Brevity is good. And feeling a tad naughty as I head into the new year.
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Wow. I'm in awe of your talent here. So much said with so little...
ReplyDeleteBloody fantastic Doctor.
ReplyDeleteSo short and so sharp. Breathtaking.
ReplyDeleteI literally ran off the end of your words but was left with a burst of images in my mind.
Oh, to be able to do that.
Really well done.
very very interesting. good hook.
ReplyDeleteI don't usually go for fiction this short, but this packs such a lot in. Well done.
ReplyDeleteYou're a master of the micro-flash, Linda. You bring so much imagery in so few words. Well done.
ReplyDeleteAll the 52-250 stuff has to be tight, but this feels it because of the language and the breadth of events covered. Splendid, Linda.
ReplyDeleteLinda? Naughty? Oh, it's going to be one of those years, is it? Lucky you!
ReplyDeleteOh to be so talented as you are with these super-shorts Linda. Powerful stuff!
ReplyDeleteI hope your new year is filled to the brim with dreams come true!
Short and powerful.
ReplyDeleteNice reveal with that last word, Linda. It appears that she was passionate about all her loves, but one more than the others.
ReplyDeleteSo succinct but so complete!
ReplyDeleteHawt!
ReplyDeleteDefinitely naughty. And hot. In more ways than one. Good story!
ReplyDeleteNaughty is good.
ReplyDeleteWow, that's some hot poetry. Nicely done, Linda.
ReplyDelete~jon
I thought i knew everything, but just had to look up 'mons'! It certainly changes the story, and so how! Brilliant. I love micro fiction and this is how it should be done (in my naive opinion).
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