JOSH WALKED TOWARD THE FRONT OF
THE SANCTUARY to the door which he knew led to offices and bathrooms and the
kitchen; all churches had the same layout. His boots squeaked against waxed linoleum, so
he slowed down, afraid someone might hear him. Josh passed through the
fellowship hall. A long table, set already for coffee hour with two silver
coffee urns and white porcelain cups balanced on matching saucers, lined the
far wall.
Another door led to the kitchen. A streetlight shone through the only
window over the sink, muted by swirling snow. Josh cracked the door of the
refrigerator. A loaf of bread and an opened bag of individually-wrapped Colby
cheese sticks. Josh dropped the cheese and bread into a plastic grocery bag. A
percolator and a can of Italian roast stood on the counter by the stove. What
he would give for a cup of hot coffee! Later. After he fed Nikko, got him
settled.
“Wake up.” Josh shook him by the shoulder. He pushed away the damp hair fallen in Nikko’s face. His friend’s eyes looked sunken. Dried blood caked his lower lip. “You need to get up.”
But Nikko lay there, unmoving. Josh picked up his arm and it flopped to the floor with a thud.
“Jesus, Nikko. Get the fuck up.” Josh wrapped his arms under Nikko’s chest and heaved him forward. But Nikko went limp, a dead weight, and slowly slid back to the floor.
Josh stood. A strong urge to kick Nikko, anything to get him to move, overwhelmed him, and as he battled the urge, it came to him Nikko was dying, he was dying now, and if he didn’t do anything, Nikko would die there, on the floor in a church in a city four hundred miles from home, and it would be all his fault and how would he, Josh, ever live with himself if his best friend died in his care?
Well guess what I'm doing - something I've been meaning to do for AGES - and that's compile all your installments of The Runaway so I can read them at one sitting... (22 pages of paper coming out of my work printer right now - hope I don't get crap!)
ReplyDeleteI won't comment for real on this one until I've read all my precious pieces of paper.
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Cathy, I am so sorry you will need to read so many words to get to this point! Hope you haven't given up, but if you want the first draft in a word doc, give me a holler and I will send your way. Peace...
DeleteOh man, you are such a tease!!! Leaving it like that after that delicious extra helping last week? No fair. What is Josh going to do?!?!
ReplyDeleteTease? No, just doing what writing books tell me to do--keep 'em guessing :) Peace...
DeleteThe tension builds. And I have not the remotest idea what happens next. Which is where I have to confess a habit that my reading friends condemn. When I am about a third of the way into a book (any book, every book except anthologies) I flip to the end and read the last chapter or so. And then I go back to the point I had left the book. And no, I don't know why, but it is a compulsion. So I am really suffering here. I so want to know.
ReplyDeleteEC, I share the same compulsion as you toread the ending. I can usually hold out much longer (usually 2/3rds). But reading the ending rarely messes up my enjoyment of the rest of the book. It's the journey of getting to the ending that fascinates me. Peace...
DeletePoor Josh. It's such a struggle every step of the way.
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It IS a struggle for Josh. Gotta throw crap at my characters. Now, how will he change after all this? Peace...
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