Thursday, March 08, 2012


The ladder leading to the attic was pulled down—she never even realized they had an attic. Attics were for treasures, for keeping a mother’s memories safe. After two weeks of picking up spent syringes and pulling out rusty cans from the first two floors, Annie needed to believe a family once lived here. But the path to the third floor landing seemed miles away, the black opening from which the ladder hung impossibly far. Graffiti stretched up the stairway walls, wounds spray painted in red and black. Annie needed to make the stairway safe; she was afraid of falling, of hurting the baby, of lying injured and no one knowing.

At first, clearing the second floor by herself seemed an impossible task. She wearied easily, the baby lying in her like a weight. She would rest, hands settled on her lower back, at the foot of the broken stairs, panic growing in her bigger than the gaping holes between treads, sharper than the railing ripped from the wall. Every time she saw the angry words, Annie scrawled on the wall, she felt slapped. She considered leaving, returning to Pennsylvania and her mother, but that would be admitting defeat. Besides, she had invested in this place—this was her home. Who cared if the investment amounted to a dollar, cheaper than a cup of coffee, cheaper than a diaper? When she looked around her, at the railing post of turned cherry, the threshold made of marble, the intricate carved molding, she felt the tug of the house’s beauty and potential under layers of dirt and neglect. “Good bones,” Todd had said the day they passed the papers committing them to the city’s urban renewal contract. “A diamond in the rough.”

But in less than two weeks, scared off by the gunshots at night and the fires flickering from the neighboring houses, Todd left, taking his Volvo, books, and clichés with him. With Todd gone Annie felt paralyzed, afraid to venture beyond the first floor of the ramshackle row-house. For a week she wandered from kitchen to sitting room to the dining room they had made up into a bedroom, crying. When her tears exhausted her, she flopped onto the mattress. The baby kicked, hard in the lower ribs, punishing, as if their predicament was Annie’s fault, not Todd’s. She had loved sleeping in Todd’s arms at night, hearing the soft tinkle of crystal above her when cool drafts moved through the house. She imagined them ghosts of prior owners, watching them, encouraging them to return the foreclosed home to its former life. Now the mattress served as a cairn memorializing her aloneness. The memory of Todd prodded her back to her chores, first from sadness but later, as the days passed, from a thin, hard anger that fueled her work.

The Sunday following Todd’s abandonment, Annie walked the two blocks to the Ace Hardware and bought a hammer, a saw, and a half-pound of ten penny nails. She did not pass anyone on the sidewalk, coming or going. Two blocks of houses, brick and Formstone, boarded up, windows blindfolded with do not enter signs, faced the reservoir. Weeping willows greened the edge of the water, the strange color of new leaves Annie always thought of as a softer chartreuse. Seeing the green made her think of nourishment, of herself and the baby. Once she cleared her way to the second floor, she would have that view, too.

But the second floor rooms were small and dark and smelled of dirty laundry. Char and mildew streaked the peeling wall-paper. Plaster covered the two south-facing windows. Annie swallowed her dismay and looked up the back staircase to the top floor. The ladder beckoned. Annie began clearing debris, tumbling bags of trash down the stairs to the foyer. She bought paint the color of garnet. At night, her bones aching, she painted over the ugly words as far as she could reach. If she stood quiet enough, she felt the cool of air rushing down, the whir of it whistling through a cracked window.

She nailed down the curling floorboards and covered the holes with plywood salvaged from the refuse heaped in the basement. When she secured the top two steps, she stood on the third-floor landing. Rose-colored paper covered the third floor walls. Two rooms, with closets smaller than the Volvo’s trunk, and a full bath with a claw-foot tub. Rust stained the porcelain, and when Annie turned on the water, the faucet hiccupped before spitting out brown water. In the farthest room, covered with cobwebs, a doll’s cradle in the corner, a lavender set of drawers. Light streamed through the south-facing window and, in the distance, Annie saw the pillows of green. This will be the baby’s room, Annie thought.

She returned to the landing. The ladder hung above her. For an instant she wished Todd was beside her, to share in this moment of discovery. She did not know what the attic contained, but she hoped it held secrets of a kinder kind: books and letters, old toys, moth-balled clothes, or even nothing but air. A family lived here once, she was certain, and that knowledge felt enough to tether her. The baby kicked, a quiet ripple like a river flowing through her belly, and Annie pulled on the bottom rung.

My classmate Jackie wrote the first line of this story--and I took it from there. A great way to storm your dormant muse. Peace...


  1. I was engrossed all the way. Thank you so much.

  2. Definitely dug this, Linda. The optimism that persists into the end, and the word play of "kinder kind" get a definite thumbs-up from the John kind.

  3. This was just superb. I was entranced the whole way through. I do hope the attic holds some treasures.

  4. You did such a good job of painting a picture of that house, and all the emotions in it. The mattress in particular, where she felt the baby move and blame her for Tony's leaving, really caught me.

    The attic was so intriguing! What was in there? But at the same time I didn't want her to find out. I wanted her to make her own memories of what that place was all about.


  5. Engrossed to the end. Superb.

  6. Thanks all for reading! When I first got my prompt, all I could think of was that VC Andrews book Flowers in the Attic. So it took awhile to get that idea out of my head. A colleague of mine mentioned she and her husband had bought a rowhouse for a buck in Baltimore, and that fueled the idea.

    Jai, I have no idea what is in the attic. I did not stick around long enough to find out.