Musings on writing and the mind...
nadas -love it
Simple, sweet and satisfying. The rhythm of this made me smile.
The rhythm and two stanzas work the parallel/contrast well. Simple and deep. And very satisfying.
And silverware? Alas alack for the lost stanza. :-)--John
Silver spoon
nadas -love it
ReplyDeleteSimple, sweet and satisfying. The rhythm of this made me smile.
ReplyDeleteThe rhythm and two stanzas work the parallel/contrast well. Simple and deep. And very satisfying.
ReplyDeleteAnd silverware? Alas alack for the lost stanza. :-)
ReplyDelete--John