tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post6855219491041205122..comments2023-08-17T04:03:48.173-04:00Comments on leftbrainwrite: SNOWSTORMLindahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-2402723113476916192010-10-25T20:59:55.040-04:002010-10-25T20:59:55.040-04:00Hey you kind readers -- thanks! My weekend passed ...Hey you kind readers -- thanks! My weekend passed in a poof! I had fun with this piece, and what's really quite cool is that some of my word 'play' was unintentional (like 'blows' and 'cooks'. I need the Whis to show me these things!). Channeling the inner muse I guess...<br /><br />Still making the rounds. Peace...Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-3405970731111464832010-10-24T16:05:23.169-04:002010-10-24T16:05:23.169-04:00Wow Linda I don't know how you get character,s...Wow Linda I don't know how you get character,story,fluid, pleasing language in just a few words. Very impressive.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-65810594120564324992010-10-24T08:35:13.830-04:002010-10-24T08:35:13.830-04:00Ominous ending, Linda. When you're dealing wit...Ominous ending, Linda. When you're dealing with meth, "Pissed" can be putting it lightly.Stephenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04753736809917062955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-20765721660472724282010-10-24T02:06:08.205-04:002010-10-24T02:06:08.205-04:00Nice, Linda. Truly admired you economy of words he...Nice, Linda. Truly admired you economy of words here...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11413377601369107260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-59803787924327580012010-10-23T19:28:31.574-04:002010-10-23T19:28:31.574-04:00That's like the little click just before the b...That's like the little click just before the bullet flies through the barrel.Mark Kerstetterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13307987573435067415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-87479802727585457572010-10-23T11:29:57.084-04:002010-10-23T11:29:57.084-04:00Wow! So much depth in so few words. I suspect the...Wow! So much depth in so few words. I suspect they're gonna wish they'd waited for JJ.Samhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00361651251233078437noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-55208581904280105792010-10-23T10:16:35.090-04:002010-10-23T10:16:35.090-04:00Oh, that can't end well.
Nice, tight writing....Oh, that can't end well.<br /><br />Nice, tight writing.<br /><br />Well done, Linda.KjMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17691028465137798738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-48881303398102546502010-10-22T17:03:32.264-04:002010-10-22T17:03:32.264-04:00Excellent little slice!Excellent little slice!Laura Enohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09982794146667832204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-67092968509608921972010-10-22T14:27:58.083-04:002010-10-22T14:27:58.083-04:00rich, just so very rich in so scant words
marcrich, just so very rich in so scant words<br /><br />marcSulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-9595697791727790432010-10-22T13:56:32.480-04:002010-10-22T13:56:32.480-04:00You keep getting better with these very short stor...You keep getting better with these very short stories.David G Shrockhttp://www.dracotorre.com/blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-5160776627098449442010-10-22T09:11:18.524-04:002010-10-22T09:11:18.524-04:00Great scene, and sketched in so few words!Great scene, and sketched in so few words!Tony Nolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15090583562737225942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-54767252930275663812010-10-22T06:54:19.052-04:002010-10-22T06:54:19.052-04:00Linda, nice micro piece, and nice job of effective...Linda, nice micro piece, and nice job of effectively using the different meanings of "snow."Christian Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03160609304010597116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-69812182758495070602010-10-22T06:33:48.248-04:002010-10-22T06:33:48.248-04:00Cleverly written and the scene is perfectly painte...Cleverly written and the scene is perfectly painted with your choice of words, even allowing for a little word play. Well done.Lauritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03688820247531607677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-81931758146097696002010-10-22T03:07:07.587-04:002010-10-22T03:07:07.587-04:00Blows, get it? Ah-ha!
Brilliant diversion tactic ...Blows, get it? Ah-ha!<br /><br />Brilliant diversion tactic with the word "cooks" in the first sentence, Linda.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-8332377924495224862010-10-22T00:15:37.991-04:002010-10-22T00:15:37.991-04:00I dont thnk that's Santa at the door... Graet ...I dont thnk that's Santa at the door... Graet work in such few words.Jodi MacArthurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13373591664178281529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-5675865668644982872010-10-21T22:46:26.685-04:002010-10-21T22:46:26.685-04:00Yeah, it's great and all, perfect language, gr...Yeah, it's great and all, perfect language, great scene-setting in a few words but, but.. you can't leave us hanging here, Linda... what HAPPENS? *shakes Linda by her collar* I beg you! Tell! TELL!<br />LOL - kidding. I've obviously had too much caffiene, today.<br />Good one - I read it earlier at work but couldn't comment... because it was work... just as good a few hours later...<br />(OK. you can tell me now, everyone is gone, what happens?)Cathy Olliffe-Websterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12729578896443750402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-57168409950723274942010-10-21T22:32:23.701-04:002010-10-21T22:32:23.701-04:00Love the interpretation of the prompt. Another fan...Love the interpretation of the prompt. Another fantastic story in so few words.Danielle La Pagliahttp://www.daniellelapaglia.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-73055887864436979642010-10-21T21:45:19.273-04:002010-10-21T21:45:19.273-04:00Drugs fascinate in every form. Not a fan of being ...Drugs fascinate in every form. Not a fan of being the subject but the remarkable changes brought on leave an endless sea of inspiration.Kil Conorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09994119195129149541noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-75089042240499173082010-10-21T17:51:51.536-04:002010-10-21T17:51:51.536-04:00Excellent story told in such few words. Well done!...Excellent story told in such few words. Well done!Eric J. Krausehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05774468607814244185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-32744745994440431632010-10-21T17:07:07.400-04:002010-10-21T17:07:07.400-04:00Something just blew, thanks for sure. Linda, you&#...Something just blew, thanks for sure. Linda, you're so good at conveying so much in so few words.<br /><br />JaiJai Joshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04858987106548357551noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-76361556869096880302010-10-21T15:26:14.965-04:002010-10-21T15:26:14.965-04:00Linda, you are the master of giving us a whole wor...Linda, you are the master of giving us a whole world with but a few words. <br /><br />This is powerful, and of course I'm picturing guns with that door blowing open on such an environment!Deanna Schrayerhttp://theothersideofdeanna.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com