tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post5232490603964782496..comments2023-08-17T04:03:48.173-04:00Comments on leftbrainwrite: APRILLindahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-67609356311457996282011-06-19T21:31:45.926-04:002011-06-19T21:31:45.926-04:00"...but it was morning, time to move, again.&..."...but it was morning, time to move, again."<br /><br />There's a terrible finality and sadness to this. Nikko is farther from home and Maryland than in just distance.<br /><br />You are building up a rich set of characters for your novel, Linda. I look forward to reading it one day.KjMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17691028465137798738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-29880399916296848482011-06-18T12:23:10.411-04:002011-06-18T12:23:10.411-04:00Good sketch of Nikko. I hope some kind of redempti...Good sketch of Nikko. I hope some kind of redemption lies in his path, and that he finds his way back to the kitchen tablemazzz in Leedshttp://mazzz-in-leeds.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-24104001270053408012011-06-18T09:18:26.333-04:002011-06-18T09:18:26.333-04:00It's sad to think of the places some roads can...It's sad to think of the places some roads can take us. My heart goes out to them.Stephenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00655810270242939262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-10273738286447061102011-06-18T07:07:58.518-04:002011-06-18T07:07:58.518-04:00Describing that quiet between brother and sister a...Describing that quiet between brother and sister at the table, gnawing on toast--> poignant.<br /><br />Got me hooked; I want to know more.pegjethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15255191759031800811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-39946180369979075802011-06-18T01:21:03.760-04:002011-06-18T01:21:03.760-04:00Linda... You do skid row very well. A great charac...Linda... You do skid row very well. A great character sketch.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11413377601369107260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-23370641264805433632011-06-17T22:38:33.700-04:002011-06-17T22:38:33.700-04:00The mom in me just wanted to wrap them up and keep...The mom in me just wanted to wrap them up and keep them warm...so many are so trapped in that type of life.umbrellaladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06640257199319618306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-8748065181192079602011-06-17T22:31:26.912-04:002011-06-17T22:31:26.912-04:00Oh but this is just a tease. More, please.
We h...Oh but this is just a tease. More, please. <br /><br />We have our share of homeless where I live. Once in a while you see someone very young and it's hard not to escape the suspicion that they're there because they've chosen it. But everyone has a story.Mark Kerstetterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13307987573435067415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-37159171351781967582011-06-17T06:57:40.209-04:002011-06-17T06:57:40.209-04:00oh great, thirty is "old and worn" i'...oh great, thirty is "old and worn" i'm in trouble..you made me remember how when i was 17, 30 did look old and worn..Michael Solenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01120045114297450520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-27363004308786756432011-06-16T22:31:56.749-04:002011-06-16T22:31:56.749-04:00Very nice.Very nice.Amyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16418991492739245262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-68202984612806108422011-06-16T19:49:24.777-04:002011-06-16T19:49:24.777-04:00Great storytelling! Love the way past was slowly w...Great storytelling! Love the way past was slowly woven into the tale. Masterful.Cat Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-77737068899506977072011-06-16T17:48:41.942-04:002011-06-16T17:48:41.942-04:00I thought it sad and to think about the kitchen ta...I thought it sad and to think about the kitchen table.... Paigehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04702664099837224184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-19140519841830199402011-06-16T14:52:48.277-04:002011-06-16T14:52:48.277-04:00this is so sad. Does a good job with the character...this is so sad. Does a good job with the character sketch though. <br /><br />and I think all cities are like that.Sonia Lalhttp://storytreasury.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com