tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post4257546194855220964..comments2023-08-17T04:03:48.173-04:00Comments on leftbrainwrite: Lost in SuomiLindahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-18096674315512537452010-12-16T17:22:51.541-05:002010-12-16T17:22:51.541-05:00". . . some quality of freshness . . ."
...". . . some quality of freshness . . ."<br /><br />enjoyed discovering this line in your flash, enjoyed the discovery of you via the language carnival.Sherry O'Keefehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17152741915467896923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-52421841113179883652010-12-15T18:18:09.126-05:002010-12-15T18:18:09.126-05:00Loved this. And the last line makes so much sense ...Loved this. And the last line makes so much sense to me (a traveller).I Must Be Offhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12148155129334288438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-5630995220740014932010-12-02T06:32:56.235-05:002010-12-02T06:32:56.235-05:00...by the way, the deadline is Dec 9....by the way, the deadline is Dec 9.Nicolette Wonghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05068881909112000390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-31594578837534207072010-12-02T06:32:01.165-05:002010-12-02T06:32:01.165-05:00Hello Linda
Nice seeing you here. You might have ...Hello Linda<br /><br />Nice seeing you here. You might have read about the Language/Place blog carnival which Michelle Elvy participated in last time.<br /><br />http://virtual-notes.blogspot.com/2010/11/language-place-blog-carnival.htm<br /><br />I’d like to include this post in the December edition of the blog carnival which I’ll be hosting. It’s a lovely piece of flash and I want to include more creative pieces than those usual blog posts people tend to submit ;) Would you be happy to send a brief description of yourself and this post to:<br /><br />langplace@gmail.com<br /><br />Thanks and I look forward to hearing from you.Nicolette Wonghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05068881909112000390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-36128058980754369432010-11-21T10:50:05.662-05:002010-11-21T10:50:05.662-05:00Loved the descriptions in this one. I could practi...Loved the descriptions in this one. I could practically smell the cool pine-scented air when that window went down. Good story!Eric J. Krausehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05774468607814244185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-50206923812283495622010-11-20T15:51:17.848-05:002010-11-20T15:51:17.848-05:00Linda, your dialogue has such an easy, natural flo...Linda, your dialogue has such an easy, natural flow. This while seeming simple is actually quite hard to achieve. You are masterful. Of course they are where they need to be, you put them there.Michael Solenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01120045114297450520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-81622049943907017342010-11-20T08:26:36.984-05:002010-11-20T08:26:36.984-05:00Very lovely descriptions, Linda. I could feel the...Very lovely descriptions, Linda. I could feel the sunlight on my face. I hope she finds what she needs to find.PJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07521953491880916840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-61816396420613165722010-11-19T14:40:03.965-05:002010-11-19T14:40:03.965-05:00What a lovely man. The emotion you paint with atmo...What a lovely man. The emotion you paint with atmosphere is priceless. Love this (as always), Linda.Jodi MacArthurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13373591664178281529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-57152452330029108972010-11-19T11:27:33.592-05:002010-11-19T11:27:33.592-05:00"We are exactly where we need to be."
..."We are exactly where we need to be." <br /><br />I love that line.<br /><br />Good work, Linda, and have a nice time in the Big Easy.Stephenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04753736809917062955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-42296046091143424962010-11-19T08:28:44.486-05:002010-11-19T08:28:44.486-05:00Like John says.
He is a good fellow and how lucky...Like John says. <br />He is a good fellow and how lucky is she to have him.<br />This story makes me want to sigh, lovely Linda. Safe trip to New Orleans!Cathy Olliffe-Websterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12729578896443750402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-28982582798997945042010-11-19T07:59:33.100-05:002010-11-19T07:59:33.100-05:00It's been a while since I stopped by - almost ...It's been a while since I stopped by - almost forgot about your knack for painting big pictures with few words.trevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10930957143736509429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-61926896139905409082010-11-18T23:46:36.565-05:002010-11-18T23:46:36.565-05:00That's a good fellow there. The kind I endeavo...That's a good fellow there. The kind I endeavor to be.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-58780852247255344842010-11-18T21:32:30.945-05:002010-11-18T21:32:30.945-05:00Now, correct me if I am wrong but isn't Suomi ...Now, correct me if I am wrong but isn't Suomi Finland? <br /><br />Lovely piece - so descriptive - love the description of the air pummeling her awake,the liquid silver melting and the smell of pine...makes me wish I was north again - this is so northern.umbrellaladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06640257199319618306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-29833597555746031112010-11-18T16:23:25.395-05:002010-11-18T16:23:25.395-05:00"...a never-ending canvas of liquid silver th..."...a never-ending canvas of liquid silver that melted into water..." I love that description Linda. And what a perfect last line. This is simply beautiful.Deanna Schrayerhttp://theothersideofdeanna.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-83497072011216361972010-11-18T15:46:18.837-05:002010-11-18T15:46:18.837-05:00This is such a beautiful piece!
JaiThis is such a beautiful piece!<br /><br />JaiJai Joshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04858987106548357551noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-39732081737873664022010-11-18T15:24:51.762-05:002010-11-18T15:24:51.762-05:00haha, we will be driving through (around on loop 1...haha, we will be driving through (around on loop 12) past New Orleans sometime tomorrow!<br /><br />How super cool to see you from my window :-p. I'll wave.<br /><br />it's been chilly (for us) but will be great for you. I think no rain (maybe) but what is New Orleans without a rain shower.... Paigehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04702664099837224184noreply@blogger.com