tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post8582434789711066468..comments2023-08-17T04:03:48.173-04:00Comments on leftbrainwrite: Metro to the CityLindahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-79991284548343952042011-06-29T03:54:10.692-04:002011-06-29T03:54:10.692-04:00Nice, terse and hard. I have always thought it mor...Nice, terse and hard. I have always thought it more difficult to write a short piece - it has to be so concentrated and work so hard. This one does. Has real resonance as well, reminds me of my days riding the tube in London.Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06465240384568384634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-32779268835746618462011-06-26T12:12:31.406-04:002011-06-26T12:12:31.406-04:00their girls swagger..their girls swagger..Michael Solenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01120045114297450520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-91369301893855858692011-06-26T10:54:04.777-04:002011-06-26T10:54:04.777-04:00Reminds me of the train in Germany. Nice one.Reminds me of the train in Germany. Nice one.Cat Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-88251345928974647212011-06-26T09:43:51.927-04:002011-06-26T09:43:51.927-04:00Yes, the 'hard consonants' and also the hi...Yes, the 'hard consonants' and also the hiding behind a book - excellent.Sandra Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-12798906267843141712011-06-26T07:30:14.871-04:002011-06-26T07:30:14.871-04:00Ah, I am with the commenting on the hard consonant...Ah, I am with the commenting on the hard consonants too. When I first read it, I read "needing thin air." Then I realized it was "needling." I think there is some needing that gets left left in the "needling." I like it, lots. :)Rose Hunterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04691897685793948889noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-88279108948939365192011-06-25T20:47:28.121-04:002011-06-25T20:47:28.121-04:00good to find you here! loved the hard consonants. ...good to find you here! loved the hard consonants. <br /><br />sherrySherry O'Keefehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17152741915467896923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-6648942685518303332011-06-22T10:29:57.717-04:002011-06-22T10:29:57.717-04:00I loved the "hard consonants needling thin ai...I loved the "hard consonants needling thin air" as well - it resonates so well visually.umbrellaladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06640257199319618306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-17246001653824801002011-06-22T07:00:28.521-04:002011-06-22T07:00:28.521-04:00Hard consonants needling thin air. I can feel that...Hard consonants needling thin air. I can feel that.Lauritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03688820247531607677noreply@blogger.com