tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post8276099185525230628..comments2023-08-17T04:03:48.173-04:00Comments on leftbrainwrite: Virtual PainLindahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-9615508832150865762007-09-27T12:33:00.000-04:002007-09-27T12:33:00.000-04:00Ah Twiz... and that is only seven revisions of the...Ah Twiz... and that is only seven revisions of the entire enchilada. Some portions have seen dozens of rewrites. I am no wimp - and neither are you. Persevere, babycakes...<BR><BR>Yes, Phoebe is an only child, but daddy's still an influence in her life... if you know what I mean...<BR><BR>Chrys, so glad you love Phoebe. So do I. She was originally a mirror or foil for Ben, but then she got all assertive on me and made me make her a full-fledged protagonist. Bossy girl. She's got her own little journey to make - I look forward to your reaction on that journey.<BR><BR>This excerpt is one I read publicly. I get to sing this song, which always gets me all emotional. The audience gets all teary-eyed, too.Lindahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-98505439577427582007-09-26T13:51:00.000-04:002007-09-26T13:51:00.000-04:00Oh Linda, it's just great. I can't WAIT to read it...Oh Linda, it's just great. I can't WAIT to read it all the way through, really. I love Phoebe!Chryshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08888604641107836723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-35144545407188968682007-09-26T09:56:00.000-04:002007-09-26T09:56:00.000-04:00seven revisions. I read that and want to cry. pr...seven revisions. I read that and want to cry. probably something to do with being only 3/4's done with the first draft. :)<BR><BR>writing novels is not for wimps.<BR><BR>I'm curious-Phoebe's an only child, yes? No father either?kelleyhttp://kelleyaswan.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com