tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post8032286607965558452..comments2023-08-17T04:03:48.173-04:00Comments on leftbrainwrite: coldLindahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-31854479944394618972011-04-27T00:05:40.477-04:002011-04-27T00:05:40.477-04:00Whew! I could hardly wait to get a breath of air b...Whew! I could hardly wait to get a breath of air by the time I finished reading your piece! What a roller-coaster ride!umbrellaladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06640257199319618306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-23294649987254602972011-04-22T21:58:55.819-04:002011-04-22T21:58:55.819-04:00As I read this I felt the discomfort, the unease, ...As I read this I felt the discomfort, the unease, the torment of being that sick. Excellent imagery.<br /><br />JaiJai Joshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04858987106548357551noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-55833899503559303752011-04-22T18:03:33.768-04:002011-04-22T18:03:33.768-04:00Such sublime imagery. Remarkable.
Adam B @revhappi...Such sublime imagery. Remarkable.<br />Adam B @revhappinessAdam Bhttp://afullnessinbrevity.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-23535592475316995762011-04-22T15:37:49.803-04:002011-04-22T15:37:49.803-04:00It's all one sentence! Pretty good.It's all one sentence! Pretty good.Soniahttp://storytreasury.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-43212454355534213312011-04-22T11:22:53.612-04:002011-04-22T11:22:53.612-04:00"his mouth a hyphen"
This phrase alone ..."his mouth a hyphen"<br /><br />This phrase alone says a multitude.Lauritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03688820247531607677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-44589875432757867252011-04-22T11:19:27.625-04:002011-04-22T11:19:27.625-04:00A narrative straining against its own sterile scen...A narrative straining against its own sterile scenery. One can sense the struggle.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-21568424817339979462011-04-22T09:21:04.630-04:002011-04-22T09:21:04.630-04:00Like Marc and Deanna said... bravo, Linda!Like Marc and Deanna said... bravo, Linda!Cathy Olliffe-Websterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12729578896443750402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-3722958420907778762011-04-22T08:27:05.554-04:002011-04-22T08:27:05.554-04:00What Marc said. :) This leaves me so speechless my...What Marc said. :) This leaves me so speechless my mouth is hanging open. Outstanding work Linda!Deanna Schrayerhttp://theothersideofdeanna.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-14652149996845392712011-04-22T05:37:56.425-04:002011-04-22T05:37:56.425-04:00the final words of reflection on life I imagine ne...the final words of reflection on life I imagine nearly always coagulate around the immediate situation of the body and with your breathless, panting prose with no end until the very END itself, you capture this nicely.<br /><br />marc nashSulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.com