tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post6753756939798903914..comments2023-08-17T04:03:48.173-04:00Comments on leftbrainwrite: Lindahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-71967091001301655582010-05-04T01:12:25.691-04:002010-05-04T01:12:25.691-04:00What a poem to finish to the month.
This poem is...What a poem to finish to the month. <br /><br />This poem is almost an exhale of relief..almost. That last stanza holds a slight anxiety. <br /><br />Even your poetry is able to capture dramatic - which is why we love your fiction so much.<br /><br />Beautiful work this month and I look forward to your poetry chain of poets.Jodi MacArthurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13373591664178281529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-12902879441927211012010-05-03T16:41:59.908-04:002010-05-03T16:41:59.908-04:00The last few lines are so telling:
"...afrai...The last few lines are so telling:<br /><br />"...afraid on the<br />outtake<br />to be."<br /><br />Fear cripples us, right down to our breath.<br /><br />JaiJai Joshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04858987106548357551noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-89108047489773481672010-05-02T23:32:03.835-04:002010-05-02T23:32:03.835-04:00Congrats on making it through the month.
I thorou...Congrats on making it through the month.<br /><br />I thoroughly enjoyed your poems, Linda...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11413377601369107260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-57146461017275102792010-05-02T08:43:12.968-04:002010-05-02T08:43:12.968-04:00Congrats on making it through the thirty days. I e...Congrats on making it through the thirty days. I enjoyed reading your poems every evening, but I am looking forward to reading more PURE as well.Lauritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03688820247531607677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-33766795228215798492010-05-01T21:31:27.555-04:002010-05-01T21:31:27.555-04:00my last (30th poem) woke me up at 4 am this mornin...my last (30th poem) woke me up at 4 am this morning, demanding to be written as it had a journey go on.<br /><br />happy weekend :-)... Paigehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04702664099837224184noreply@blogger.com