tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post5487745383709362750..comments2023-08-17T04:03:48.173-04:00Comments on leftbrainwrite: HO DAY INN (The Runaway--IX)Lindahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-67439317633710109742012-08-08T11:09:26.329-04:002012-08-08T11:09:26.329-04:00Yes congrats! I love this story so much. This piec...Yes congrats! I love this story so much. This piece of it was especially vivid (but then again, I feel like I say that about all of them). I loved that Nik left while Josh was sleeping b/c I kept expecting Nik to leave, waiting for it, and it kept not happening right yet, and that was really effective. It created this sense of anticipation and dread that maybe Josh had himself.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-25241617600566745902012-08-04T02:49:28.666-04:002012-08-04T02:49:28.666-04:00Congratulations from here as well. Talent and per...Congratulations from here as well. Talent and perseverance. A powerful mix.Elephant's Childhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06650565833097914052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-42729734550078401542012-08-03T14:14:02.401-04:002012-08-03T14:14:02.401-04:00WOOT! Congratulations are indeed in order - let...WOOT! Congratulations are indeed in order - let's break open the champagne! I'm so happy for you Linda. <br /><br />Meanwhile, this installment is excellent! The atmosphere is so strong, so well-described, especially the sound of the trucks "carumphing", which is exactly what that sounds like. And I love the overall ominous feel of the cheap, dark hotel. Now, where is Nik going I wonder...Deanna Schrayerhttp://theothresideofdeanna.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-60107981046345591582012-08-03T12:26:37.498-04:002012-08-03T12:26:37.498-04:00Congratulations on polishing off the entire story,...Congratulations on polishing off the entire story, Linda!John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.com