tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post4465749931076233763..comments2023-08-17T04:03:48.173-04:00Comments on leftbrainwrite: TERMINAL (The Runaway--VIII)Lindahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-65669077374634575302012-07-27T07:55:16.261-04:002012-07-27T07:55:16.261-04:00This is getting even more exciting Linda. I too lo...This is getting even more exciting Linda. I too love the part about the guitar playing seeming too lout - excellent showing of the atmosphere. Can't wait for more!Deanna Schrayerhttp://theothersideofdeanna.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-23537567466828510052012-07-27T06:41:33.712-04:002012-07-27T06:41:33.712-04:00Emilia, as always you are full of wisdom! I DO nee...Emilia, as always you are full of wisdom! I DO need to get to the action sooner, though, and I can bring some of that former relationship in through flashback. Words are... words. They can be recycled :)<br /><br />Yes, heroin.<br /><br />I only know this bus terminal because I picked you up there once--remember? Peace...Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-35793780286305212012012-07-27T06:39:30.776-04:002012-07-27T06:39:30.776-04:00EC, my dear, your life is topsy-turvy, so I thank ...EC, my dear, your life is topsy-turvy, so I thank you for sparing 5 minutes to read. I think of you often, and happy my words serve as escape. Peace...Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-75704424688340309242012-07-26T23:34:00.650-04:002012-07-26T23:34:00.650-04:00Hmmm, I don't think the rest is throat-clearin...Hmmm, I don't think the rest is throat-clearing at all. Partly because juxtaposing the previous pieces of the story with this one really allows us to see how naive Josh was about Nikko. We got to see Nik as Josh saw him before the trip. I think that's important. Plus the writing was sooo good.<br /><br />So is it heroin?? At very first I was thinking alcohol, the DTs, but then with the small packet and all of that...<br /><br />My fave line was about even playing the guitar softly seemed too loud. As always, amazing and I can't wait for more!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-19087802023846023932012-07-26T15:29:18.854-04:002012-07-26T15:29:18.854-04:00Thank you. I am unbelievably behind in my reading...Thank you. I am unbelievably behind in my reading on the blogosphere at the moment but I will return. You have achieved the miraculous - I cannot see the runaway being a success and ugly thoughts are percolating in my head and I still want to read more...Elephant's Childhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06650565833097914052noreply@blogger.com