tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post3074103359067909459..comments2023-08-17T04:03:48.173-04:00Comments on leftbrainwrite: This City StreetLindahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-53111524603474765292011-10-29T09:09:28.621-04:002011-10-29T09:09:28.621-04:00Lovely work. Lovely words.Lovely work. Lovely words.Tim VanSant Writeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17614259042362664840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-44284008170697116922011-10-28T17:06:05.917-04:002011-10-28T17:06:05.917-04:00I particularly love this part at the end:
"...I particularly love this part at the end: <br /><br />"sighs, hopes<br />promises unfurled<br />whispers--I am<br />sated in the comfort<br />of my skin."<br /><br />A micro poem on its own!Karyn Eislerhttp://www.karyneisler.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-69243939762939234492011-10-28T09:01:34.787-04:002011-10-28T09:01:34.787-04:00Loved the midnight colour in this.Loved the midnight colour in this.Sandra Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-63008640881707886022011-10-28T03:15:22.462-04:002011-10-28T03:15:22.462-04:00Loved this! To be sated in my own skin while the w...Loved this! To be sated in my own skin while the world whirs around me--that would be wonderful.I Must Be Offhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12148155129334288438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-36683473558010574102011-10-27T11:19:27.189-04:002011-10-27T11:19:27.189-04:00The rhythm and language of this piece really suite...The rhythm and language of this piece really suited the time of night.umbrellaladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06640257199319618306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-39910043646050074272011-10-27T08:58:51.604-04:002011-10-27T08:58:51.604-04:00nice riff here that could keep on going..nice riff here that could keep on going..Michael Solenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01120045114297450520noreply@blogger.com