tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post1932672567309990867..comments2023-08-17T04:03:48.173-04:00Comments on leftbrainwrite: It's so hotLindahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-19947540496571431362011-08-06T14:22:21.499-04:002011-08-06T14:22:21.499-04:00I can feel the heat of the city, like I'm ther...I can feel the heat of the city, like I'm there. I love the subway line especially. Such memories.Lou Freshwaterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08849342766852653969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-75093850047785400192011-07-23T20:18:14.098-04:002011-07-23T20:18:14.098-04:00Linda- I love this piece. Congratulations on your ...Linda- I love this piece. Congratulations on your placing over at Poetic Asides. I've been there 4 years as well... and am also your fellow traveler at lang/place carnival!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-10315574368244782532011-07-23T09:38:56.620-04:002011-07-23T09:38:56.620-04:00Linda, I can more than feel the heat here, I can S...Linda, I can more than feel the heat here, I can Smell it, and oh, does it stink! (Which means the poem is heavenly of course). :)<br />Congratulations lovely lady!Deanna Schrayerhttp://theothersideofdeanna.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-6857351308014940142011-07-22T15:57:24.240-04:002011-07-22T15:57:24.240-04:00Hello, I'm visiting from the blog carnival. I ...Hello, I'm visiting from the blog carnival. I love the images of "slouching towards night" and "the bullhorn of Jesus." I can almost feel the heat.Vivian Faith Prescotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06037496619980707677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-34685591621433426542011-07-13T16:39:38.747-04:002011-07-13T16:39:38.747-04:00I also loved "catalytic clysm" ...
[tri...I also loved "catalytic clysm" ...<br /><br />[tried to trip Laurita so I could get here and say it first, but she's a slippery minx she is.]<br /><br />congrats on making the top 50 poems. that was some pretty stiff competition. very cool.<br />*BIG SMILE*Karen from Mentorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685540761526680384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-60582467406978127612011-07-13T07:04:18.025-04:002011-07-13T07:04:18.025-04:00Congrats on the poems. I'm a huge fan of your ...Congrats on the poems. I'm a huge fan of your poetry, so I'm not at all surprised by your placing. <br /><br />Take this one for example. I can feel the heat of the morning settling on the city. Catalytic clysm. I love that.<br /><br />I feel quite dry and uninspired as well. Just slogging trough. Perhaps that's the best time to do the "housekeeping" work.Lauritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03688820247531607677noreply@blogger.com