tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post148886042339664144..comments2023-08-17T04:03:48.173-04:00Comments on leftbrainwrite: DIGGINGLindahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-91965218119078240152012-05-04T22:18:00.663-04:002012-05-04T22:18:00.663-04:00Thanks all for reading this small scene. John, if ...Thanks all for reading this small scene. John, if I have learned one thing from my writing program it is this: the specific detail is the powerhouse of the story. That is what I strive for,<br /><br />Ladies, glad yyou enjoy a good weep--me too!<br /><br />Jimmy, thank you. Jeremiah is one of my current characters, and of course I love him ;^) You will see more of him. Peace...Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-24033798098295052342012-05-04T19:37:18.803-04:002012-05-04T19:37:18.803-04:00So Jeremiah’s your new character, Linda. What does...So Jeremiah’s your new character, Linda. What does he look like? How old is he? He has lost all his loved ones and will try to forget in the midst of war, death, maybe his own... Your writing is better than ever. Your storytelling is brilliant. This scene at the cemetery is sober and sad... I look forward for the next chapter.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-77937178224142200642012-05-04T02:43:16.415-04:002012-05-04T02:43:16.415-04:00Powerful writing. Tears from here also..Powerful writing. Tears from here also..Elephant's Childhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06650565833097914052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-57973823833222135082012-05-04T01:40:58.975-04:002012-05-04T01:40:58.975-04:00And thank you for sharing, Linda. You have an abil...And thank you for sharing, Linda. You have an ability for including words or details that no one else would. Simply hitting schist there means something that any other wording wouldn't.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7186877685534377957.post-20435721809602551152012-05-03T13:08:15.371-04:002012-05-03T13:08:15.371-04:00That last paragraph did it! I'm weeping with h...That last paragraph did it! I'm weeping with him! Very good writing!Janet Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10126248666972072628noreply@blogger.com